Something I learned about writing a procedure is that you need to number the steps in order for it to make sense.
Something I would like to do better is using adverbs more.
Here is my writing:
Goal: how to make jelly pops
Requirements: packet of jelly crystals, fruit sticks, measuring cup, whisk, jug, party cups, water.
1.Set up cups.
2.Make jelly - put jelly in 1 cup of boiling water. WARNING boiling water!
3.Wait 1 minute then add half a cup of cold water and stir.
4.Once stirred pour the jelly (before it sets) in the party cups.
5.Then add fruit sticks so a bit is sticking upward.
6.Freeze for 2 hours.