Writing

WALHT  add a twist to our writing.

Here is my poem:

I didn’t BUT I did

I didn’t jump over the moon

I didn’t go to Africa

I didn’t become a cow

BUT I did go to Wellington

I didn’t see a shooting star

I didn’t see a talking cow

I didn’t see a skateboard snap in half

BUT I did see a fish jump out of the water

I didn’t eat an ant

I didn’t eat a pink pie

I didn’t eat a piece of metal

BUT I did eat feijoa ice cream

By Luke

Next time I would like to add more action to my writing to make it better.