WALHT  add a twist to our writing.

Here is my poem:

I didn’t BUT I did

I didn’t jump over the moon
I didn’t go to Africa
I didn’t become a cow
BUT I did go to Wellington

I didn’t see a shooting star
I didn’t see a talking cow
I didn’t see a skateboard snap in half
BUT I did see a fish jump out of the water

I didn’t eat an ant
I didn’t eat a pink pie
I didn’t eat a piece of metal
BUT I did eat feijoa ice cream

By Luke

Next time I would like to add more action to my writing to make it better.

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